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Friday, 10 June 2016

the bush

Name:genesis                                                                                    9 mar 2016



One day to boys name mac and sam went in to a big bush as they were walking. They got lost  there was no Signal they Climb the tree but thir was no signal thir so they went to the Second tree but thir was on signal thir mac and sam cried bat when then went to the third  tree bat there was no signal thir so mac  found the big  tree so they there  got signal to get home bat as they where going a tree fall on mac was Scared sam Called the ambulance they toke long they came and Help him he got out and he was Better. Sam was so happy.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow great story but where is your paragraphs??

Anonymous said...

Genesis did you check your punctuation!!! Anyways good writing

Kane said...

Good job Genesis.

Anonymous said...

I like your writing keep it up

Anonymous said...

I like your writing keep it up

Anonymous said...

Very good but where is your paragraphs

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