Name:genesis 9 mar 2016
One day to boys name mac and sam went in to a big bush as they were walking. They got lost there was no Signal they Climb the tree but thir was no signal thir so they went to the Second tree but thir was on signal thir mac and sam cried bat when then went to the third tree bat there was no signal thir so mac found the big tree so they there got signal to get home bat as they where going a tree fall on mac was Scared sam Called the ambulance they toke long they came and Help him he got out and he was Better. Sam was so happy.
6 comments:
Wow great story but where is your paragraphs??
Genesis did you check your punctuation!!! Anyways good writing
Good job Genesis.
I like your writing keep it up
I like your writing keep it up
Very good but where is your paragraphs
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